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An invisible heart breaks once
Yet soundly screams for you,
The pain that has become so familiar.
Eyes cry dust of what I thought I knew
With shades of violet,
All I see.

Close those eyes,
The saddest eyes I have ever seen
And fade away into your dreams
Of violet facades and whisperings,
Awake quickly to find shadows
That resemble the spirit of me.

Sleep through the night
Of violet skies and silver stars,
With the pain you feel
And breathe through haunting sneers.
For by your side I will always be
To kiss goodbye the silent tears.

Fake those wide smiles
And lie with the loud laughter
Of violet hazes and a faint sadness,
Unreachable you seem to be.
My understanding now lost,
But a real treasure you are to me.

Empty my heart
And let my words spill upon concrete,
Cold and thick with no cracks
To force them into the surface
Of violet bruises and harden disdain,
A love I cannot explain.

Standing strongly by,
Whether you fly away from here or stay,
Waiting for a return in confusion,
A wait in vain my heart aches it will not be
With shades of violet and your face,
All I see.
©2007-2009 ~fortress-of-tears13
:iconfortress-of-tears13:

Author's Comments

I wrote this poem for someone a few months back
but never gave it to them, just didn't feel it was a right time I guess, plus I wanted to perfect it a bit.
It was when there was a break between us and how they confessed to how sad they always were.
Hopefully they know who they are.
You really do have the saddest eyes I've ever seen.

I chose violet because...well it's to resemble a haze, like...not knowing maybe? But it's a hopeful haze, because it is not gray and black. And too, I just liked the sound of it and the meaning it has for me. Anyways, really don't know how to describe, get your own meaning from it.

I just hated seeing this person so sad all the time, and when they were not with me, I wanted them to know that I would still be there for them, like I am now.
Love for me is hard to explain, and therefore probably seems...well, all I can really say, is that I love them a lot, and want to care for them, be there for them, and like I said "kiss away their tears".

The fifth verse, just for clearness, is talking about how they seem a bit harden by past pains and such and how it seems like they cannot realize the simple matter of "why" sometimes. It fit then, and it fits now.

Rambling on.
Hope you guys like it.

Especially you <333

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:iconnwizard:
I'm glad you finally submitted it!
I loved this poem the first time I read it, but I like it even more now.. great job!
:blowkiss:

--
Waht happens when 5 emos sit in a square room?
One dies, 'cuz he has no corner to cry in.

*Apophysis
:icondaughter-of-time:
Perfect savanna.....and really fits the situation as well.

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:heart: :blackrose: ....Your tears don't fall, they crash around me
Her conscious calls, the guilty to come home
Your tears don't fall, they crash around me
Her conscious calls, the guilty to come home
... :heart: :blackrose:
:icondarkmoon69:
tis very lovely indeed
I'm sure your friend will like it
&& if they don't I'll take a rusty old mace to the side of their head
:D
I've been in a particularly violent mood here of late

--
Broke the gates of Hell
Deposed the Overlord
Took a dump on the floor
Seconds later I'm bored
My armor is spiny
My regrets are tiny
No concerns for the lives that I trash
But since we were last parted
I'm right back where I started
- GWAR
:iconfortress-of-tears13:
Thanks so much hun, really appreciate it
Yeah, I just wanted to make it souch better, and feel I have
Thanks so much for the fave, means a lot
:heart:

--
:bulletpurple: I have an idea.
Here take this knife.
Cut out your heart.
Now place your heart into my hand.
*Stabs the heart a million times*
There now. Better? :bulletpurple:
:iconfortress-of-tears13:
Thanks hun :heart:

--
:bulletpurple: I have an idea.
Here take this knife.
Cut out your heart.
Now place your heart into my hand.
*Stabs the heart a million times*
There now. Better? :bulletpurple:
:iconfortress-of-tears13:
thanks so much, hope they will.
lol, seems like you have
thanks for the fave as well
means a lot
:heart:

--
:bulletpurple: I have an idea.
Here take this knife.
Cut out your heart.
Now place your heart into my hand.
*Stabs the heart a million times*
There now. Better? :bulletpurple:
:iconvampirevengeance:
:clap: Amazing, beautiful poem :heart:

--
The only way you'll really know is to really let it go. Maybe in the future, you're gonna come back to me.
-Ingrid Michaelson
:music:
:icondarkmoon69:
you're welcome
:heart:

--
Broke the gates of Hell
Deposed the Overlord
Took a dump on the floor
Seconds later I'm bored
My armor is spiny
My regrets are tiny
No concerns for the lives that I trash
But since we were last parted
I'm right back where I started
- GWAR
:iconabundantamenities:
i remember this one

--
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang, but a whimper
:iconnerdxv:
Beautiful poem
:blackrose:

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My account is move to ~Jims-Hart

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