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Remember,
As you walk through life,
And your heart falls upon the ground,
I will be behind you,
Picking up the sore heart,
Healing the hateful wounds,
Placing it gently back where it belongs.

Remember,
When you feel you cannot go on,
And your confused heart grows weak,
I will be beside you,
Walking with your every step,
Helping you to stand strong,
Drying the mournful tears from your eyes.

Remember,
In times when you feel true love will never find you,
And your fragile heart breaks into crimson pieces,
I will be before you,
Catching the falling fragments,
Putting them back together ever so perfectly,
Carrying your new heart within mine.

Remember,
When it is my time to go,
Should life ever overwhelm me,
Do not shed a tear,
Do not let your genuine heart worry,
Nor let fear overtake your loving soul.
For I will guide you,
I will never leave your side.

I will always be with you.
I will always be there for you.

Always.
©2006-2009 ~fortress-of-tears13
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I wrote this poem for someone, in response to a poem they wrote for me. Just showing loyalty, showing that I care, as they have done for me. But most importantly, letting them know that I will always be there for them no matter what.

NOTE: The last stanza is not to indicate that I die, as I do in my other poems. It is merely answering to the last stanza of their poem, and is to say that even in death I will be there for them.

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This is beautiful... :+fav: Can I use it sometime? I'll give you credit when I do.

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Thank you :heart:
When you say use it sometime, do you mean like using lines and such? Sure, just make sure you send it to me to review first and yes credit me in the deviation :)

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:bulletpurple: I have an idea.
Here take this knife.
Cut out your heart.
Now place your heart into my hand.
*Stabs the heart a million times*
There now. Better? :bulletpurple:
Using lines, yeah. It's not exactly for a deviation... It's more likely for a story of some sort. ^^; *nervously laughs*

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Maybe it's not my weekend, but it's gonna be my year.

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Oh that's cool :)
A story you're writing? awesome
Sure go ahead :heart:

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:bulletpurple: I have an idea.
Here take this knife.
Cut out your heart.
Now place your heart into my hand.
*Stabs the heart a million times*
There now. Better? :bulletpurple:
:) Ok I am wordless ^^; :hug: But I love this poem. it is like :star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star: ...etc. :)
:happycry: :hug:hug: ^^; damn, i wish i was so wordless :lonely:
the meaning of it is so...understandn to me :) i <3 it :)

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i love this so much savanna....

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:heart: :blackrose: ....Your tears don't fall, they crash around me
Her conscious calls, the guilty to come home
Your tears don't fall, they crash around me
Her conscious calls, the guilty to come home
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Ah you finally managed to finish it!
Well done! It's beautiful...

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She said;
Don't! Don't let it go to your head
Boys like you are a dime a dozen,
Boys like you are a dime a dozen.
She said;
You're a touch overrated,
You're a lush and I hate it
But these grass stains on my knees
They won't mean a thing!
This is beauty. Perfection. I love how you say you'll carry their hurts with you, inside you.

Amazing. Incredible. Outstanding.

Bravo, trully.

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This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang, but a whimper
Thanx! :hearts: x 100

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Maybe it's not my weekend, but it's gonna be my year.

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i love this , its a fantastic bit of work , took you alongtime ?
its word perfect , in every way , the person you wrote it for must bet so proud and happy .well done my friend !

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